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I've done a light edit of Days of Becoming (my X1, X2, X3 Bobby/John-centric novel) and laid it out as a book, which you can download as a pdf. It's so long, I've had to put it in two volumes. Volume 2 will follow in a couple of weeks.

The changes are minor; mostly small word corrections. The only substantive change is the renaming of a peripheral original character. I realized, to my horror, that I had named Bobby's 2nd-half roommate "Derek," which is the name of another minor character, Derek the red-faced rapper. So Derek Tran is now Kevin Tran. Other than that, you can still go ahead and read the html version of the novel without fearing that you are reading an inferior verions.

Click here to download the zipped pdf (2.8 MB)