Days of Becoming, Chapter 5

[talktooloose]

Here's why it took so long: I wrote an 11,000 word chapter that my betas correctly pointed out was actually two chapters. So I cut it in two and fixed up the first half to produce this Chapter 5. That means Chapter 6 is 75% done in draft. I will really, really try to have it up by mid-November.

Thank-yous without number go to kuria_dalmatia and lux_apollo for their enthusiasm, precision and patience. Without them, this novel would be a mess.

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[talktooloose.livejournal.com]

heh, I didn't have to change one word of Mike's speech -- I just made him jump Bobby!! There's a lesson in there somewhere.

Thanks again for all your help. I hope to have a version of 6 out to you in a week!