Yay, a new chapter! I really liked the flow of this one, the powerful glimpses we get of even "minor" characters - Jean Grey comes to mind. It's also nice to see that Bobby isn't quite as, I don't know, self-assured? mature? strong? as he pretends he is. The whirlwind of a new relationship, combined with the whole mutant/potential X-Men situation must be really difficult to process. He really needs somebody to hug him and tell him that things are going to be alright. Even if they aren't.
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Date: 2008-04-06 10:19 am (UTC)I really liked the flow of this one, the powerful glimpses we get of even "minor" characters - Jean Grey comes to mind.
It's also nice to see that Bobby isn't quite as, I don't know, self-assured? mature? strong? as he pretends he is. The whirlwind of a new relationship, combined with the whole mutant/potential X-Men situation must be really difficult to process. He really needs somebody to hug him and tell him that things are going to be alright. Even if they aren't.