Days of Becoming, Chapter 4
Aug. 4th, 2006 09:19 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
talktoolooseWow, I finally got here. I swear to god, I thought this would be an easy chapter to write. I now know that I'm doomed to never find anything easy in this life because as soon as I acheive some kind of competence, I immediately set the bar higher.
Thanks again to my wonderful betas for asking the right questions.![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
mofic got the subtext and nixed the kiss (blame her!). kuria_dalmatia's stubborn love of my story made her particularly passionate on structural issues. I went down a long rabbit-hole I didn't need to in response and then came halfway back to the original. I have to think before I edit!
The link will send you off to the DOB website, but the comment button at the end of the chapter will bring you back to LJ. Please comment; it gives me hope!
Chapter five is already underway.
Read Days of Becoming Chapter 4!
Or go to the DOB homepage!
Thanks again to my wonderful betas for asking the right questions.
mofic got the subtext and nixed the kiss (blame her!). kuria_dalmatia's stubborn love of my story made her particularly passionate on structural issues. I went down a long rabbit-hole I didn't need to in response and then came halfway back to the original. I have to think before I edit!The link will send you off to the DOB website, but the comment button at the end of the chapter will bring you back to LJ. Please comment; it gives me hope!
Chapter five is already underway.
Read Days of Becoming Chapter 4!
Or go to the DOB homepage!
