That last part was made of awesome. Loved how you explored all of the relationships - established and budding - in this. And John, he makes me grin and breaks my heart at the same time. He's such a hard ass on the outside, but inside he's this lonely, sad kid that (I think) really does just want someone to love him. And it's all spiced and flavored with this very real cynical/jaded air.
Ahhh! And! Kitty and Bobby . . . is it over now? I mean, I get the feeling she suspects Bobby may be more same-sex inclined. Though hey, she was good practice. I do like her in this story, don't get me wrong, she's great as is Jubiless, but I just tend to wear Bobby/John goggles.
Anyway, I very much look forward to the next chapter and will be back to fangirl you as soon as I've read it. Any hints on how long it's gonna be before it's up for me to drool on read?
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Date: 2007-02-14 04:39 am (UTC)That last part was made of awesome. Loved how you explored all of the relationships - established and budding - in this. And John, he makes me grin and breaks my heart at the same time. He's such a hard ass on the outside, but inside he's this lonely, sad kid that (I think) really does just want someone to love him. And it's all spiced and flavored with this very real cynical/jaded air.
Ahhh! And! Kitty and Bobby . . . is it over now? I mean, I get the feeling she suspects Bobby may be more same-sex inclined. Though hey, she was good practice. I do like her in this story, don't get me wrong, she's great as is Jubiless, but I just tend to wear Bobby/John goggles.
Anyway, I very much look forward to the next chapter and will be back to fangirl you as soon as I've read it. Any hints on how long it's gonna be before it's up for me to
drool onread?