Days of Becoming, Chapter 4

[talktooloose]

Wow, I finally got here. I swear to god, I thought this would be an easy chapter to write. I now know that I'm doomed to never find anything easy in this life because as soon as I acheive some kind of competence, I immediately set the bar higher.

Thanks again to my wonderful betas for asking the right questions. mofic got the subtext and nixed the kiss (blame her!). kuria_dalmatia's stubborn love of my story made her particularly passionate on structural issues. I went down a long rabbit-hole I didn't need to in response and then came halfway back to the original. I have to think before I edit!

The link will send you off to the DOB website, but the comment button at the end of the chapter will bring you back to LJ. Please comment; it gives me hope!

Chapter five is already underway.

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Thanks for reading. I'm having a great time.