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talktooloose ([personal profile] talktooloose) wrote2004-08-13 05:32 pm

Father and Son

Walking to the subway, I heard a guy yelling, "You always do that, Dad! That's why people don't like you sometimes!" He was in his early twenties, suddenly filled with the power of analysis. Ten year earlier, the best he could manage in his logic-numbing rage was, "I hate you! Leave me alone!"

Ten years from now, it might be forgiveness and understanding. And then years further, compassion as he watches the small old man climbing the stairs slowly, poised to catch him if he should stumble.

[identity profile] new-improved.livejournal.com 2004-08-13 04:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like the way you put this. Very simple and it rings true.

[identity profile] talktooloose.livejournal.com 2004-08-16 10:51 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I'm glad to read that you're in love. Why? Because I'm such an old softie!

[identity profile] qwantz.livejournal.com 2004-08-13 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
"That's why people don't like you sometimes!"

That's awesome. I'm going to be incorporating that into my day-to-day conversation.

[identity profile] talktooloose.livejournal.com 2004-08-16 10:51 am (UTC)(link)
It sounds like something the Velociraptor would say. It's such a funny line because it's so patronizing and pseudo-helpful.