talktooloose: (John_Byrne)
talktooloose ([personal profile] talktooloose) wrote2008-10-17 08:52 am

Days of Becoming, Chapter 25

Title: Days of Becoming, Chapter 25 - “Revenge of the Red Widow”
Author: Talktooloose
'Verse: X-Men movieverse
Warnings: Explicit sex, swearing, dubious pedagogy
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] mofic and [livejournal.com profile] lux_apollo. Thanks for questioning me in all the right ways.
Disclaimers: Marvel and 20th Century own the X-Men, I own my original characters, and we have joint custody of the children.

Series Summary: This novel focuses mainly on the paths Iceman and Pyro take on their way to adulthood and how they discover and deal with their love for each other. It is a novel about what Joni Mitchell calls "the dream's malfunction" and how we can learn to make our own dreams when our heroes fail us. Other X characters (including ones from comicverse and elsewhere) and OC's play prominent roles and the action begins before X1, continues through the events of X2 and X3 and concludes in the aftermath of that movie.

Previously in Days of Becoming: Mike and Andi's mutant youth tour comes together, with a launch party planned at the mansion. Acclaimed mutant trip-hop performer, The Dazzler has agreed to join the tour. Meanwhile, John's life has started to lose its stable foundations. Everything he thought he had is slipping away. Bobby and Rogue are growing closer, and Xavier has told him he can't submit his poems to a journal as this could bring the authorities down on him and the whole school. Bobby, for his part, is drawn to the normalcy of having a girlfriend and terrified to be associated in any way with John who seems not to care if he's perceived as queer. After John reads a homoerotic poem in class, Bobby asks Rogue to be his official girlfriend.

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[identity profile] nat-dimension.livejournal.com 2008-10-17 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Another delicious chapter! Couldn't have been more welcome after a day of uninspiring lectures. Keep up the good work.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_profiterole_/ 2008-10-17 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Can you be any more self-centred, Charles? John has a huge problem with Bobby, the world doesn't revolve around you!

*kicks Bobby* I'm sad for John, and in this context, I think he made the right decision.

[identity profile] ayumie.livejournal.com 2008-10-17 08:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch. Does Bobby even know what he's doing? I think John has pretty much reached his breaking-point and writing doesn't cut it anymore as an outlet. Even if I didn't know what was coming, the whole situation would make me fear for the future.

(Anonymous) 2008-10-18 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
This is was really good.
I knew john was going to eventually get it =P.
I cant wait for more.
Poor Bobby though, but like you said, maybe he just "washed everything away".

Also at the beginning you called it a "mike stand" did you mean mic?
idk =P, just tryin to help ya out though.

[identity profile] lux-apollo.livejournal.com 2008-10-18 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
Will read the final version and finish the edit of 26 tomorrow morning. For now? Bed.

[identity profile] oxymoronic.livejournal.com 2008-10-18 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god, that has to be the saddest, most beautifully heartbreaking thing I've read in a very long time. I hardly ever cry at fics, and here I am blubbering idiotically...

Dammit. Dammit.

[identity profile] mandlebars.livejournal.com 2008-10-24 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
as usual stellar chapter, the best 'john after bobby goes to rogue' scenario I've ever read! Dude you are a gem :) 'I'm not you're secret whore' conjured up such emotion! Bobby needs to wake up.

*whimper*

[identity profile] caribdragon.livejournal.com 2008-12-16 07:12 am (UTC)(link)
I've read it all and I love it all but this chapter is my favorite cuz I'm a sucker for the tragic romance and this is the chapter that made me cry.