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talktooloose ([personal profile] talktooloose) wrote2007-07-11 01:32 pm

Days of Becoming, Chapter 13

Title: Days of Becoming, Chapter 13 - “Raccoon Eyes”
Author: Talktooloose
'Verse: X-Men movieverse
Warnings: Sexual situations, swearing, snowcones.
Series Summary: This novel focusses mainly on the paths Iceman and Pyro take on their way to adulthood and how they discover and deal with their love for each other. It is a novel about what Joni Mitchell calls "the dream's malfunction" and how we can learn to make our own dreams when our heroes fail us. Other X characters and OC's play prominent roles and the action begins before X1, continues through the events of X2 and X3 and concludes in the aftermath of that movie.
Chapter Summary: Bobby and Kitty deal with their feelings in the wake of Lance's departure. Mike is fed up with Jubilee's new friend. What is Christian Turcott really up to?
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] kuriadalmatia and [livejournal.com profile] lux_apollo. Thank you for making me a better writer.
Disclaimers: Marvel and 20th Century own this stuff but they need us to make sense of it.
Notes: Rayen is liberally adapted from a character in Grant Morrison's 616 X-Men run.

This chapter was supposed to be easy—just a transitional bit between more dramatic sequences—but it turned into a beast (and no, Hank is not in it).

Unreserved and slobbery thanks to Lux and Kuria for insightful betas and brilliant suggestions. Bobby's Halloween costume is thanks to Lux and Kuria suggested one of Sam's lines as well Charles' unique memento. In addition, they helped me stay on track and true to my tale. Words fail.


Here's the chapter!

Here's the DOB homepage for earlier chapters!

Please use the link at the end of the chapter to return to LJ and comment on the post.

Yay

[identity profile] underhardlove.livejournal.com 2007-08-31 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I could comment under Chapter 14th.

I CANT WAIT FOR THE 15TH CHAPTER!

i hope it comes out soon.

:p

I want some action between Lance and Bobby and his big balls hah.

Re: Yay

[identity profile] talktooloose.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Soon is a relative concept. Third week of October at a guess. Then I'll speed up. Honest.

Bobby's big balls (lol, I don't know how that happened but it cracks me up) will get action, though I won't say from whom.

Re: Yay

(Anonymous) 2007-09-18 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Not from kitty please!!! Haha :p and hopefully not Pyro yet, im hoping you can change my mind on Pyro i really dont like him that much and everyone uses him as a relationship between bobby.

Re: Yay

[identity profile] talktooloose.livejournal.com 2007-09-18 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Dear Sir or Madam:

You are reading a Bobby/John novel. It will contain Bobby/John.

lol. I hope I can change your mind, too. I love John, and identify with both characters.