http://13empress.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] 13empress.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] talktooloose 2009-07-08 08:07 am (UTC)

kickass chapter as per usual - I sympathize with Bobby in some ways but I think he's such a #@$#$#!! Is this intentional? gotta love teenagers - all that angst and the hormones that force them to act like such asses and the insanity - you do that well.
*scratches head* dunno if I ever commented to you before... but ah, nvm if I'm repeating myself
was one of the first fics I ever read in x-men - stayed up all night too lol and ah, got me into it
i like long stories and the completeness of it; the world being out there and interacting with them and giving them problems and being JUST there a huge honking part of their life - I like that. All those other tangents makes the story more juicy for me.
Thanks for writing!

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